Review Detail of Jo_J in Ascension: Legend of the Blue Deity

Great cover page! Original and catchy! The synopsis is also well written. Very interesting story from the beginnig! The plot is captivating, the characters expressive. You're doing well! You don't really struggle with tenses, style or grammar. It's your advantage over the rest (non-English speakers), use it well! Wish you endless inspiration and a lot of great ideas!