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Review Detail of TianY4 in The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

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writing quality scks big time, it was bearable in the begining thanks to the potential the story and world had, unfortunately, that is screwed up later on the ln. story develepment--> i gave it 2 stars due to having so much potential in the begining but ending up as sht after chapter 150-170, the author keeps pulling bs out of thin air, "perks" or qualities of things are changed just in benefit of the author not wanting to look for a way to do things right. Example: this skill can only be used once each 5 days, 10-20 chapters later you see the character spamming that skill nonstop and making up cds and all the sht(thats just one of the things that are messed up) the story had so much potential, it could've been such a good story but it actually ends being sht, i'm in chapter 656 atm and im just reading it to end it, cause once i start reading something i've got to do it till the end, this ln is a textbook example of how not to develop a story, absolutely destroyed its potential and good start of it. Character design--> absolute garbage, the 0 actual developement of characters the only "developement" they do is going from 0 to 100, there's no in between, the characters change all of a sudden without any sense, they just change for the heck of it, mostly because the author doesnt know how to develop the characters in a logical way. World background --> this is one of the saddest things in this ln it had so much potential in its background, it could've been soooooooooooooo much and sooooo good but it ended up in being nothing, linear background. P.S : lots of its side characters or mc related characters are copy-pasted from animes and other lns --> c.l.u.s.t.e.r --> index from the anime/manga on which a girl gets the knowledge of all the spells in the world inside her head,when she uses the spells its like a robot = same as mc's friend, she comes from a church, same as in this ln,all the people in the church just want to use her except her 2 close "friends" that just want her to be happy and look out for her, this is only one of the many characters that are copy-pasted from other ln's and anime/mangas. With this i've said it all, i was so hyped with this story when i started it seeing all the potential it had, decided to ignore the sht grammar and constant typos just to give it a chance for its world and story potential, and now, i regret it all, i ill still read it till the end(till i catch up) because i have lots of time, but seriously, if you havent started reading i absolutely dont recommend it, it will give you false hope on seeing an original story with good plot and developement and then it will crush mercilessly your hope, it will piss and laugh on you, this is a joke to any reader that has a minimum of iq.

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