writing quality scks big time, it was bearable in the begining thanks to the potential the story and world had, unfortunately, that is screwed up later on the ln. story develepment--> i gave it 2 stars due to having so much potential in the begining but ending up as sht after chapter 150-170, the author keeps pulling bs out of thin air, "perks" or qualities of things are changed just in benefit of the author not wanting to look for a way to do things right. Example: this skill can only be used once each 5 days, 10-20 chapters later you see the character spamming that skill nonstop and making up cds and all the sht(thats just one of the things that are messed up) the story had so much potential, it could've been such a good story but it actually ends being sht, i'm in chapter 656 atm and im just reading it to end it, cause once i start reading something i've got to do it till the end, this ln is a textbook example of how not to develop a story, absolutely destroyed its potential and good start of it. Character design--> absolute garbage, the 0 actual developement of characters the only "developement" they do is going from 0 to 100, there's no in between, the characters change all of a sudden without any sense, they just change for the heck of it, mostly because the author doesnt know how to develop the characters in a logical way. World background --> this is one of the saddest things in this ln it had so much potential in its background, it could've been soooooooooooooo much and sooooo good but it ended up in being nothing, linear background. P.S : lots of its side characters or mc related characters are copy-pasted from animes and other lns --> c.l.u.s.t.e.r --> index from the anime/manga on which a girl gets the knowledge of all the spells in the world inside her head,when she uses the spells its like a robot = same as mc's friend, she comes from a church, same as in this ln,all the people in the church just want to use her except her 2 close "friends" that just want her to be happy and look out for her, this is only one of the many characters that are copy-pasted from other ln's and anime/mangas. With this i've said it all, i was so hyped with this story when i started it seeing all the potential it had, decided to ignore the sht grammar and constant typos just to give it a chance for its world and story potential, and now, i regret it all, i ill still read it till the end(till i catch up) because i have lots of time, but seriously, if you havent started reading i absolutely dont recommend it, it will give you false hope on seeing an original story with good plot and developement and then it will crush mercilessly your hope, it will piss and laugh on you, this is a joke to any reader that has a minimum of iq.

xD lilith supremacy? she just wanted to use the mc, all her thoughts were about manipulating him so he would develop in a tool she could use, she didnt "actively" use her charm but even if she suppresses it it affects normal humans which he was before he got that passive, so yeah, she used her passive charm in order to have it easier to get close to him but not using it actively in order to not make him a useless puppet, so yeah sure "lilith" supremacy, a woman that ended up falling in love with the mc wow so beautiful so good, all that sht deletes the fact that she just wanted to use and shape him into her tool, wtvr you a big beta.

hello there donnEll i've been bungee reading your story for 2 days and im currently at chapter 173, for what i've seen so far, the story has really good potential, and even though the grmmar isnt perfect its easy to understand so i was wondering if you could let me edit the grammar from the earlier chapters till i catch up with the story, so while i keep reading i could "fix" the grammar of each chapter, i dont log in too much in webnovel so i dont know if i can actually send dm's in here, just so you know i logged in to write to you and ask for permission on editing the grammar, so i could get your approval and a way to contact you and send the chapters with the editing, i'll leave you my mail here, feel free to contact me anytime borja_perez95@hotmail.com