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Review Detail of RenuKakkar in The Queer Emperor's Wife Is A Little Too Daring!

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The story is interesting and is developing well. I found it a bit confusing in the early chapters, as the Main female lead seems to be having mental issues. The Characer Design is good. Not many characters yet but the main Male lead with the purple eyes seems interesting. Who he is, will be revealed in later chapters, I suppose. World background is good in so far as the present scenario is concerned. I have reached the 18th Chapter but I do not find the synopsis tallying with the story. Maybe later on the synopsis will reflect the story. The stability of updates seems good too and the writing quality is ok. However, if you are writing in the first person, i.e. you are the main character, then stick to the first person. But if you are the narrator then write about the characters in the third person, then stick to that style. Please don't mix the two. This is the first time that I am reading a book with lots of emotions. Nice change. I will be watching out for the rest of the story. The book is in my library and further chapters are awaited. All the best, Author!

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The Queer Emperor's Wife Is A Little Too Daring!

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Thank you so much for your honest feedback! Yes the book has barely began, I'm just on to building up the stable background first with things left with loose ends which will rejoin later. My novel deals with two world's one from the ancient times and the other which is presently the modern one. Stay tuned for more exciting plot reveal. Thanks!