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UnholyGiriko
UnholyGirikoLv16mthUnholyGiriko

I would like to share my experience with this story, as it has ended and years has passed ever since I started reading this. In all honesty, at the start of the story, I was having an 'icky' feeling because of how Will (MC) behaves, which may deter others from continuing in reading the story, however, as you go on and read further, you will grow attach to Will, sure it may sometimes be cringe or you might have different ways on doing things. But, this is what made me feel fond to Will, because of his ways. The writing is fine, you can visualize what's happening and sense the emotions on the text. World building is great, it portrays what's happening, how it turned to be, it answered some questions that I had, although there were some that is still a mystery to me. (Seas were only talked about at the last part, but I guess it didn't serve anything to the story.) All in all, I recommend this story to anyone. If you read this, please do give it a try. There are other things that I want to tell, but due to this being my first time making a review and english not being my native language, I couldn't form words or sentences that I wanted to share about this story, so pardon me for my lackluster review.

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In another world with the crafting system

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UnholyGiriko
UnholyGirikoLv1UnholyGiriko

Ohh, I just noticed, this was supposed to be a five star, I might have press the wrong one by accident. How do I edit it?