Ohh, I just noticed, this was supposed to be a five star, I might have press the wrong one by accident. How do I edit it?

I would like to share my experience with this story, as it has ended and years has passed ever since I started reading this. In all honesty, at the start of the story, I was having an 'icky' feeling because of how Will (MC) behaves, which may deter others from continuing in reading the story, however, as you go on and read further, you will grow attach to Will, sure it may sometimes be cringe or you might have different ways on doing things. But, this is what made me feel fond to Will, because of his ways. The writing is fine, you can visualize what's happening and sense the emotions on the text. World building is great, it portrays what's happening, how it turned to be, it answered some questions that I had, although there were some that is still a mystery to me. (Seas were only talked about at the last part, but I guess it didn't serve anything to the story.) All in all, I recommend this story to anyone. If you read this, please do give it a try. There are other things that I want to tell, but due to this being my first time making a review and english not being my native language, I couldn't form words or sentences that I wanted to share about this story, so pardon me for my lackluster review.

Thank you so much for bringing this story to life, although it saddens me that this is the end. But, it brings a smile on my face thinking of the times I was waiting night after night for the next chapter. Take care, and I'll be wishing you for success and accompanying you on your future works. All good things will come to an end, but the memories will continue to live on inside my heart. P.S: Will there be a continuation of this story? I hope it does, I really want to see if the elves and humans befriend each other, what happened to Valerie, will they see Alex again, what will happen 18 or 19 years after the story, and to see the adventures of Will again.

Blaize got the sea stone removed by the lady that has vacuum power(?), She was a member of the Spider (Don't remember what the group is called, I skimmed it too) Blaize also used it in the fight with the chimera ants.

Thank you for making thia novel, your work made me satisfied and a lot of anticipation for the next chapter; I won't lie, there was also a pinch of annoyance with cliffhangers. This help me go through my day when I was bored had nothing else to do, I am quite saddened that I am making this comment as a farewell and thank you. I wish you great success with your future endeavors!

Thanks for the chapter!

REVENGEEEEEE!!!!!

The D

I'm glad that I didn't give up on waiting, now I can see this glorious day

This paragraph doesn't make any sense to me, wouldn't that just make the grandma nag to her more? To me it just sounds dumb

AAAACCCCHOOOO

MOM!! I CAN'T PAUSE AN ONLINE GAME!

Praise to thee, for giving us this magnificent news

NOOOOOOO, GIVE ME MOOOOAAARRRR

Don't mind me I was just testing if I can't edit my comment

Meep

I know I'm 1 year late but it will not stop me from saying HAREM!

Thanks

Everyone he is close to? so Shizue Heh