Review Detail of Lauren_Layton in A love so unexpected

This really needs to be edited. One example is edited they meant "Nothing more than that" but said "Nothing much than this". It's bad English through some and others could have flowed better. The characters were cute. I think the communication between characters shouldn't be clumped until one paragraph. It makes it hard for the reader to figure out who said what. The plot wasn't anything special. I've read these types of stories a lot. I wish she would put a unique spin on this kind of plot. For a new writer It's not terrible. I wish the author good luck on her other books, if the author is a she.