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Lauren_Layton

Lauren_Layton

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2024-01-11 JoinedGlobal
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton1d
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    It was ok. It wasn't finished and the time taken to get to the sex scene only to have it cut off was a waste.

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    Best Friends
    LGBT+ · J.M. Snyder
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton1d
    Posted

    This was obviously not finished but it was also obviously at the end so it didn't really matter. Everything was resolved pretty much. It was a good little story. The sex scenes were hot 🔥 🥵

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    A Sutter's Bay Christmas
    LGBT+ · Shawn Lane
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton1d
    Posted

    He didn't finish the last two pages on this website so in the comments on the last chapter a fan took a screen shot of the rest. The book was amazing! The sex scenes were smoking hot 🔥 🥵 😍

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    Twice in a Lifetime
    LGBT+ · Shawn Lane
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton2d
    Posted

    Lovely 😍 The sex scenes were hot 🔥 as usual with this author. It was really sweet too. 😋 Great job!

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    Sweet Reunion
    LGBT+ · Shawn Lane
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton2d
    Posted

    Perfect! The sex scenes were hot 🔥 🥵 and it was very sweet! Great job! Very well written!

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    Galaxy's Heart
    LGBT+ · Shawn Lane
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton2d
    Posted

    This is adorable. I got the gist of it early on but it's still good. Great job!

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    With These Wings
    LGBT+ · Drew Hunt
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton2d
    Posted

    Really great! The sex was hot 🔥 🥵 and the other times were sweet 😋. Great job!

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    Tempted to Taste
    LGBT+ · Shawn Lane
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton2d
    Posted

    This is what I needed! The sex scenes were hot 🔥 🥵 😍 and the story was so real and adorable! I can't get enough! I needed a story where both mc's parents were supportive. The conflict of Joshua's self esteem issues and the manscaping, or lack there of, is a legitimate issue. People are expected now to have a certain image that sometimes isn't for them. I'm so happy Will was the type of guy who lifted Joshua up and understood him. That's relationship goals! I love this story! 😀 ❤️ 😍 💗

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    Pumpkin Rolls and Porn Sounds
    LGBT+ · Kris T. Bethke
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton2d
    Posted

    I love it except for the abrupt cut off at the end. More stories about cross dressing need to come out. Thanks for this but I think it needs to be finished.

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    Don We Now Our Gay Apparel
    LGBT+ · Feral Sephrian
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton3d
    Posted

    You have to love ❤️ a story work a dog 🐕 in it! This was great! It was well written worth a sexy scene thrown in. Very nice! Great job!

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    The Gift of Casey
    LGBT+ · Shawn Lane
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton3d
    Posted

    This was a great story! The sexy scenes were hot 🔥 🥵 😍 and it was adorable! Great job! I would love to hear more about Pablo and Sebs life.

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    Gratefully His
    LGBT+ · Shawn Lane
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton3d
    Posted

    This was a great story. I do feel like the sexy scenes were cut off way too soon but it had a good flow. Great job!

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    Figure It Out
    LGBT+ · J.V. Speyer
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton4d
    Posted

    Wonderful!! The sex scenes were 🔥 🥵 hot! It was sweet and adorable. Great job!

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    An Unconventional Relationship
    LGBT+ · Casper Graham
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton4d
    Posted

    It didn't have any sex scenes in it but it was awesome! The sex scenes and feeling them connect would have made a huge difference. Brian was a little shit but the rest of the characters were well written and adorable. Great job!

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    Blame It on the Fruitcake
    LGBT+ · Pat Henshaw
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton4d
    Posted

    Perfect! Sexy times with a really sweet ending. Wonderfully written and in just 10 chapters you get two great character development. 👏 👍 ❤️ 🔥 🥵 🥞

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    More Than Summer
    LGBT+ · Shawn Lane
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton4d
    Posted

    A lot of people didn't like this but I got it for half off which was about 100 coins. I got to chapter 7. It's smut. If you like smut with a story to it this book it for you. It's not bad writing. The passion and horny scenes are there. I'll read more later but I would recommend it if you want something to get your motor going. 😉 😜

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    The Gay Blade
    LGBT+ · Temple Madison
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton4d
    Posted

    Was it worth it? YES! Does it need to be completed still? Unfortunately, also yes. 😕 The characters are great. I was to make sure Jackson and Charlie are doing OK. I want to see more of Vince and Ian. I want Ethan to fall in love, maybe have a poly relationship with Ian and Vince. I want Vanessa to burn 🔥. 🔥 Great job author!

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    SPARKS
    Urban · LOLOthaNinja
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton4d
    Posted

    This really needs to be edited. One example is edited they meant "Nothing more than that" but said "Nothing much than this". It's bad English through some and others could have flowed better. The characters were cute. I think the communication between characters shouldn't be clumped until one paragraph. It makes it hard for the reader to figure out who said what. The plot wasn't anything special. I've read these types of stories a lot. I wish she would put a unique spin on this kind of plot. For a new writer It's not terrible. I wish the author good luck on her other books, if the author is a she.

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    A love so unexpected
    LGBT+ · MScPhysics
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton10d
    Posted

    It's a good little story. 😌 The ending was a surprise. I kind of wish I knew the real story now. It has the potential to be longer. Great job! 👍 👌

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    Surviving the Apocalypse
    LGBT+ · Tinnean
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  • Lauren_Layton
    Lauren_Layton10d
    Posted

    This was a great story! Everyone said it was beautiful and they were right. I wish it was longer but it did end at a right time. Great job!

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    Beau and the Beast
    LGBT+ · Rick R. Reed
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