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This is what I needed! The sex scenes were hot 🔥 🥵 😍 and the story was so real and adorable! I can't get enough! I needed a story where both mc's parents were supportive. The conflict of Joshua's self esteem issues and the manscaping, or lack there of, is a legitimate issue. People are expected now to have a certain image that sometimes isn't for them. I'm so happy Will was the type of guy who lifted Joshua up and understood him. That's relationship goals! I love this story! 😀 ❤️ 😍 💗
A lot of people didn't like this but I got it for half off which was about 100 coins. I got to chapter 7. It's smut. If you like smut with a story to it this book it for you. It's not bad writing. The passion and horny scenes are there. I'll read more later but I would recommend it if you want something to get your motor going. 😉 😜
Was it worth it? YES! Does it need to be completed still? Unfortunately, also yes. 😕 The characters are great. I was to make sure Jackson and Charlie are doing OK. I want to see more of Vince and Ian. I want Ethan to fall in love, maybe have a poly relationship with Ian and Vince. I want Vanessa to burn 🔥. 🔥 Great job author!
This really needs to be edited. One example is edited they meant "Nothing more than that" but said "Nothing much than this". It's bad English through some and others could have flowed better. The characters were cute. I think the communication between characters shouldn't be clumped until one paragraph. It makes it hard for the reader to figure out who said what. The plot wasn't anything special. I've read these types of stories a lot. I wish she would put a unique spin on this kind of plot. For a new writer It's not terrible. I wish the author good luck on her other books, if the author is a she.