Review Detail of Petros_Laoumela in Bank of the Universe

I have read until charter 40, not feeling like spending fast passes to read more, will read at aggregator site but nvm that the review. The idea is original and that is what enticed me into reading, an omnipotent bank that everyone even gods are indebted too! The idea rocks! But the way the author writes and develops is ... bad. like someone very young writes which his best anime was dragonball. (no offense to those who still like it i did too back in the day but then.. i grow up, unfortunately.. maybe..) Too many words and expressions repeated again and again which make me skim through the paragraphs to only read the dialogues and again only those who are between the mc and anyone else. The story progression is very unrealistic, fast and machine like. for example: Mc: what do i need right now? a i need X. where do i get it? a there! why do i need it? for R... so on and so on. Human beings struggle with decisions they dont have everything planed out especially when they get into something totally new like a new job or a new art or a new anything. Also the background story of the main character is minuscule and doesnt really make you emphasize with him or help into the immersion. Finally the world is a very generic world which i guess you find in other bad quality cultivation novels and the hierarchy is all the time shot down with a new higher level power being revealed pretty often. If you have nothing else to read maybe you can have a bit of fun but only if you skim through the descriptions of the places the people and the abilities the characters use because they are monotonous and will make you bored in no time