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Heretoc
HeretocLv43yrHeretoc

The story idea is quite nice but the translation is sub-par. It's not unreadable, and infact way better than MTLs. But it still has some deficiencies like grammar, sentence formations and few other minor mistakes. Although the translator has messed up some cultivation terminology and such. Coming back to the story. I have just reached chapter 40, so unlike my most other reviews, this will be a bit biased. Biased because I haven't read further ahead. Most stories tend to start at the top and then slowly decline either due to repetition or lack of ideas. I usually review only after reading 200 chapters + or in special scenarios. This is not a special scenario...or maybe it is. Anyway . The idea is new. I have yet to read anything quite close to it. Nope, I take that back. It's similar to Traffords Trading Club. Even execution is a bit similar. But unlike Trafford's, this one integrates cultivations with trading. Talking about character building, you will not find anything new. It's just 40 chapters so I have yet to see if he turns out to be another Chu Feng or Mary Sue. But atleast till now his behaviour has been nothing repulsive nor something special. He is just is. The world seems to be grand and since the Bank traders on all levels, we have been given hints about the higher realms and it's cultivators. Overall, nothing much to say. Looks like a good story. I will go ahead and read further in raws and drop a review here when I reach 200+. Till then, it's definitely a nice read. Not the best, but the story itself is a 4/5 and -1 due to the translator. Till then Cya.

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Heretoc
HeretocLv4Heretoc

Oh, dropping a short description of what the story is about. MC has transmigrated but doesn't has any golden fingers or special talent. He get's transferred into a slave body and is killed after getting caught cultivating. This results him in becoming the heir or the better term being the next owner to the Universe Bank. Universe Bank is not exactly a bank. It's more like a pawn shop. You trade various things for whatever you need. It can be soul for some artifact or money for few years of life. Basically anything. The problem is that the previous owner was completely incapable and managed to mess everything up. He loaned many things but didn't collect them. So now MC has to collect back all the debts. But the issue is that MC has no cultivation and the debtors include Celestial Lords who are basically top of the cultivation food chain.

Heretoc
HeretocLv4Heretoc

Oh, it's not a comedy.