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maxgonz
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Well I just finished reading up to chapter 419, and I decided to make review. The reason for this is due to the fact that many other reviews have simply been misleading and not giving true insight into whether or not you should read this book, so this review will mostly be disproving any of the se accusations. Before this though I want to clarify that this book is not perfect in any sense and it has some bad points but many of these criticisms I've seen have just been blatantly lies. The first thing is that MC doesn't develop store, this is false. As of the latest chapter the whole story has revolved around the store and the only times Mc leaves is for missions generally speaking, throughout the book the store has expanded, gained new functions and offered new services to customers. Secondly that MC is dumb for going to other secret realms as it is dangerous, this is due to the fact that the system forced MC to go there, not only that but dangerous?? It has been explained that other than Beast Kings that the MC would be perfectly and that secret realm had been scouted and it was said that there was no possibility of there being beast kings, meaning that the Mc was perfectly capable on top of that he gets a reward from the system which he needed at the time. All in all the novel is pretty good, definitely recommend reading, it's most negative part is the MC's IQ sometimes, he simply says some stuff that is kinda dumb, not necessarily actions but just words, like he doesn't understand simple thing, this is something which some side characters pointed out to Mc such as Joanna, that was the only thing which was "unsettling to me" as making a MC dumb for no reason is just stupid and makes the reading less enjoyable. On another note the world background and power rankings are explained well and it can be seen that Mc's journey has just practically begun, I especially like that MC has begun to have more and more control on the system and can't be forced to do things unless he wishes.

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Astral Pet Store

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Unruh_
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As someone who also weathered thorugh 1000+ Chapters of this book so far, I'd have to agree. The book certainly has many flaws -such being nonsensical competitions between the MC and other people. This kind of face-slapping wasn't really contributing much to the story. And yes, it is kind of hard to follow the state of mind of the MC. Sometimes, he's completely indifferent about others dying or not. But then, he also cares a lot about whether they live or not. His actions often contradict each other. Besides that, the story is very well developed. I'm speaking about the world background. Each cultivation levels are thoroughy explained. Through the face-slapping, we also learn alot about the nature of the world he is living in. Although that face-slapping is slightly, slightly... repetitive, it mostly is interesting, for my taste. also, people seem to have misunderstood the book at its core. It was never about the pet store in and of itself - it was more about what the store offered to the MC, to make him grow and turn him into one of the strongest beings in the universe.

maxgonz
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Oh yeah and one more thing is the Mc's personality, although I like cold-blooded Mc's this Mc's moral code just sometimes isn't in the right place he is like an arrogant villain sometimes, another thing that I didn't like much.