useless weak protagonist, lived 13 lives as the supposed supreme of those lives, but in the 9th ep a mere captain takes him by the neck and tells him which library is his, the protagonist does nothing and is still afraid, apart from the wishes he asked for in the beginning God didn't answer, horrible story
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LIKEThen what's the plot point of those reincarnation, can't he just make it the first goddamn reincarnation???? Isn't that much more easier to make sense than just having him have 15 reincarnation that for all purposes doesn't fk matter, the story could go on without that plot point A good growth is always better than someone masquerading strong but it's actually weak Now tell me from all the good growth novel you have read is this a "good" growth or do you see like the rest of us that is trash growth rate
Loaded_Demigod29:-First of all, all lives except for the one on regular earth are sealed (meaning he cannot use the experience and knowledge of those lives). -Secondly, you don't seem to understand how plot progression and growth work, because as you mentioned this takes place in the 9th ep, if he were already stronger than a captain at this stage, this growth rate would have caused the entire story to derail in a self-insert power fantasy with zero important character development and character interactions, both of which are crucial for a story to be considered 'good'.
PinguGod_:What happens when Donald Trump and Hillary Clinton get a child? You happen.
Yeah, cause he’s gonna fucking predict everything happening, and how would someone know if they have experience? And writing a good story? That’s arguable, just **** up bro
Ryuu_Gei:i like how you diss the story but you do realize he has experience of writing a good story, and it just proves that you base your judgement on what is shown in front of you, instead of thinking countless other possibilities. cuz, you are below than a mere retard. just plain stupidity
if you have the fucking intelligence to read the whole story carefully, HE CAN'T REMEMBER HIS PAST LIVES BUT HE KNOWS HE HAS THEM. he only has fragmented memories of his modern era life, and even then. it still limited. And based on the fucking encounter with the fucking god he was talking to. You can tell it was a norm for the god to **** him around.. READ THE DAMN STORY CAREFULLY.
IPreferLonerMc:Yeah, cause he’s gonna fucking predict everything happening, and how would someone know if they have experience? And writing a good story? That’s arguable, just **** up bro
cant you scroll down from the book's menu, there's stories. one of which was the MHA killer quirk which is on the top list on the fanfic power stone standings, instead of just criticizing every goddamn thing quickly you should be fucking rational for once. It's like after a thousand books you read, you still cant even use that brain of yours.
IPreferLonerMc:Yeah, cause he’s gonna fucking predict everything happening, and how would someone know if they have experience? And writing a good story? That’s arguable, just **** up bro
This has got to be one of the most retarded replies I've ever seen. "This just proves that you base your judgement on what is shown in front of you" Yeah, no shıt cupcake. What else is he supposed to base his judgement on? Is he a telepath that can read the author's mind? Is he a psychic that can see the future? And what the hell does it matter that one of his other novels used to be high in the rankings? Why should a completely separate novel affect his judgement for this one? Bruh 🗿
Ryuu_Gei:i like how you diss the story but you do realize he has experience of writing a good story, and it just proves that you base your judgement on what is shown in front of you, instead of thinking countless other possibilities. cuz, you are below than a mere retard. just plain stupidity
So they write one good book and all of them turn out good? This has a 3.7 review outa 5, so something is clearly wrong if he’s so good and his other books got 4 or whatever stars. And wtf am I critiquing?
Ryuu_Gei:cant you scroll down from the book's menu, there's stories. one of which was the MHA killer quirk which is on the top list on the fanfic power stone standings, instead of just criticizing every goddamn thing quickly you should be fucking rational for once. It's like after a thousand books you read, you still cant even use that brain of yours.
If you have the fucking intelligence to know not everyone reads the story. Fuck, I’m here checking the reviews to see if I should read it but when there’s bitches like you reading this then I’d rather not
Ryuu_Gei:if you have the fucking intelligence to read the whole story carefully, HE CAN'T REMEMBER HIS PAST LIVES BUT HE KNOWS HE HAS THEM. he only has fragmented memories of his modern era life, and even then. it still limited. And based on the fucking encounter with the fucking god he was talking to. You can tell it was a norm for the god to **** him around.. READ THE DAMN STORY CAREFULLY.
FBI_B1TCH:This has got to be one of the most retarded replies I've ever seen. "This just proves that you base your judgement on what is shown in front of you" Yeah, no shıt cupcake. What else is he supposed to base his judgement on? Is he a telepath that can read the author's mind? Is he a psychic that can see the future? And what the hell does it matter that one of his other novels used to be high in the rankings? Why should a completely separate novel affect his judgement for this one? Bruh 🗿
IPreferLonerMc:If you have the fucking intelligence to know not everyone reads the story. Fuck, I’m here checking the reviews to see if I should read it but when there’s bitches like you reading this then I’d rather not
The mc doesn't actually predict what will happen, he only know the location of a major place like witch forest. I only ask you read the first chapter before you review any further and use your own judgement. Please and thank you.
IPreferLonerMc:Yeah, cause he’s gonna fucking predict everything happening, and how would someone know if they have experience? And writing a good story? That’s arguable, just **** up bro
Kasukage:The mc doesn't actually predict what will happen, he only know the location of a major place like witch forest. I only ask you read the first chapter before you review any further and use your own judgement. Please and thank you.
Ryuu_Gei:i like how you diss the story but you do realize he has experience of writing a good story, and it just proves that you base your judgement on what is shown in front of you, instead of thinking countless other possibilities. cuz, you are below than a mere retard. just plain stupidity
Ryuu_Gei:i like how you diss the story but you do realize he has experience of writing a good story, and it just proves that you base your judgement on what is shown in front of you, instead of thinking countless other possibilities. cuz, you are below than a mere retard. just plain stupidity
PinguGod_:What happens when Donald Trump and Hillary Clinton get a child? You happen.
Idiot. DIDNT HE JUST SAY HE DOESN'T REMEMBER!? IF YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT HOW HE BECAME THE STRONGEST EVEN WITHOUT MEMORIES THEN THE ANSWER IS SIMPLE HE DIDN'T HAVE TIME! TIME, TO TRAIN HE WAS TRANSMIGATED AT 10 AND ONLY HAD 5 YEARS OF TRAINING. SO ITS OBVIOUS! HOW STUPID. On his past lives he became the strongest because he had lots of time.