Review Detail of Althen in VRMMO: The Returnee

Let’s begin with the good things. The updates are frequent, the grammar is normally good, the world is developed little by little and the plot advances at a decent rate. The vr idea although not new is good and I always enjoy this novels. Bad parts now. Since I just reached chapter 60, I will mention something that has been bothering me. He was a gamer, and it is the 3rd time he finds a big boss. HOW can he still not know about the bosses reaction at 10% health? It makes no sense, and if the intention is to give interest to the fight it not only not works. It makes it quite worse. Sometimes the author repeats a fact three times in the same chapter for three chapters straight. The reminder is welcomed once if this has been mentioned a long time ago. If not it just seems filler for word count. This may be personal, but naming the world he was before (coma) as fantasy world makes it a bit confusing since the game is a fantasy world. I understand it may be part of the plot, but just name it the other world. It solves in a simple way. Finally, I am not a fan of cliche characters. They have no development and are usually bland, with the same attitudes and personality. In this novel I can mention the fatty, the sister and maybe the teacher. That last one makes reactions that don’t make any sense and that’s why I’m not sure. (She has been his teacher for a while, and suddenly she falls in love with him. Her being a teacher that you described as kind but cold and responsible. It makes no sense and that kind of person will never act the way you are making her, sometimes a responsible teacher and the next time acting like a teenage girl with a crush). One more thing, as an advice, don’t make the main character dense on random occasions. I think nobody likes a stupid MC. He can’t be able to notice she is lying and then not notice she is blushing and clearly developing an interest in him. He has experienced 10 yeas in another world, so he should be used to interacting with woman. More so if he can even interact with nobels. I will keep reading it and see where it goes.