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Althen

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    Althen24d
    Commented

    Awful cringe chapter

    Ch 190 Misunderstanding Dragons
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    Out of Space
    Sci-fi · Neobear
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  • Althen
    Althen1mth
    Commented

    I would like to keep with the main characters with kingdom developement :)

    Ch 149 [interlude]The army with a state II
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    Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)
    TV · Chill_ean_GUY
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  • Althen
    Althen5mth
    Commented

    The stats part does not make that much sense. There should be a difference. 15 levels x2 stats are 30 more strength.

    Ch 45 Training Outside Part 1
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    Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)
    Games · Follower_of_Abadom
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  • Althen
    Althen6mth
    Commented

    You mention he didn’t want to kill the king because he forgets it’s a game all the time… so this time he want to kill all and changes his view in les than 24h? 2 chapters???

    Ch 63 The Hunters
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    New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
    Games · Galanar
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  • Althen
    Althen6mth
    Commented

    If the spirit of the kingdom appeared when praying to save an elf in the kingdom, the king, why aren’t the concubines given the same option?

    Ch 62 The Kingdom's Spirit
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    New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
    Games · Galanar
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  • Althen
    Althen6mth
    Commented

    How many times are her looks going to be mentioned? Yes, green eyes, blond hair, looks like a fairy…is it for word count?

    Ch 105 0105 The Door to Ruins
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    Harry Potter: The Golden Viper
    Book&Literature · FicFrenzy
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  • Althen
    Althen6mth
    Replied to FicFrenzy

    Because even though you have written him as always being careful, he is risking it by getting cursed on purpose. He could instead get his memories back, less risky and since it was information maybe related to the development of the world he is at, definitely indispensable.

    Ch 35 035 The Curse Of The Dark Lord
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    Harry Potter: The Golden Viper
    Book&Literature · FicFrenzy
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  • Althen
    Althen8mth
    Commented

    this was not a chapter...it was complete filler.

    Ch 119 Chapter 119
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    HP: The Arcane Thief
    Book&Literature · Snollygoster
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  • Althen
    Althen11mth
    Commented

    This last chapters are way to forced.

    Ch 106 Chapter 106: Sorry Hufflepuff
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    HP: The Arcane Thief
    Book&Literature · Snollygoster
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    Althen1yr
    Replied to Galanar

    He is a gnome, low heath and a glass canon. On the other side our MC has quite an amazing DPS, so that it’s not a really valid reason. It’s the same as the king, you need an antagonist, but since you made them quite hateful, the reasons for allowing them to live are not enough to push through logic.

    Ch 71 Ranged Enemies, Part 2
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    New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
    Games · Galanar
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    Althen1yr
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    After everything he was told, I see no reason why the MC will stop the death of the king. Bad to his new family, bad for the kingdom, bad for him. Could you please explain author?

    Ch 61 Unbridled Rage
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    New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
    Games · Galanar
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  • Althen
    Althen1yr
    Commented

    75% of the chapter is filler description. After a great fight on the one before I expected more.

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  • Althen
    Althen1yr
    Commented

    How can he equip anything if he doesn’t have the necessary stats that are required to equip it?

    Ch 9 Chapter 9 - Abundant Loot and Upgrading
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    Infinite Evolution: A spy in multiverse
    Movies · _Crimson_
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    Althen1yr
    Commented

    I’m really liking the novel…but I don’t understand this chapter at all. You are saying that 2 booklets of outdated skill to increase mana reg (that I’m sure asking their parents would have helped) cost the same (actually more) of 5 chances that give you in cases 50% in others lower probability of having more affinity? I don’t think it’s a good trade at all.

    Ch 23 Cultivation Skills
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    The Over-Break System
    Fantasy · ScotchTy
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  • Althen
    Althen1yr
    Commented

    How does hammer have the suits made if the twins didn’t allow Rhodes to take the suit to the us Army?

    Ch 19 Chapter 19 – Responsibility
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    Silverfire - A MCU Fan-Fiction
    Movies · GodOfFreedom
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  • Althen
    Althen2yr
    Commented

    Great chapter. BTW, will the mass release happen?

    Ch 596 Big Brother
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    The Oracle Paths
    Sci-fi · Arkinslize
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  • Althen
    Althen2yr
    Commented

    Every time a mass release or catching up with chapters is coming…bam! No more chapters for a while.

    Ch 564 Soul Reaper
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    The Oracle Paths
    Sci-fi · Arkinslize
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  • Althen
    Althen2yr
    Commented

    How are they evolving with an attack? Don’t they have to consume part of the evolved to gain its characteristics?

    Ch 534 Where is He?
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    The Oracle Paths
    Sci-fi · Arkinslize
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  • Althen
    Althen2yr
    Replied to Althen

    The same with moving around London by himself.

    Ch 13 Going Home
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    Magus of the Wizarding World
    Book&Literature · Arrowinmyknee
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    Althen2yr
    Commented

    Out of curiosity… do you think it’s normal for both parents just think it is cute he is making a patent for two potions when he is 12 years old? Not asking how, why, …

    Ch 13 Going Home
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    Magus of the Wizarding World
    Book&Literature · Arrowinmyknee
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