Review Detail of ReaderFromRoblox in My Vampire System

It doesn't deserve all the hype that it's getting. The writing quality is subpar, and every chapter has spelling and grammar mistakes. Webnovel's 4.6/5 rating converted into an actual good rating is 3/5. Characters are pretty shallow. We don't know the MC's goal or motivation for staying alive or getting stronger. There's nothing that defines the MC's personality. We're told that the MC got bullied throughout his school years and is an orphan but we don't see any effect of that. The MC doesn't develop any traits that we'd expect someone like the MC to develop. Instead, he just seems like a normal guy, which pretty much makes his background story useless. What also annoys me is that some sentence structures do not flow well and sometimes I would have to reread. For example, in chapter 46, "Although Quinn wasn't strong enough to help now, in the future he would repay back this kindness. Now with Momo's soul weapon, the confidence in him grew." These two sentences were confusing. The author doesn't need "repay back", he only needs "repay" because "repay back" is counterintuitive. As for the second sentence, I thought that Quinn got ahold of Momo's soul weapon. The second sentence is just written horribly. I'm not trying to hate on the author but when I'm reading a novel that I'm enjoying and I read through constant mistakes like those, it makes me sad. The only interesting part about the novel that's keeping me hooked up on is the vampire system. This is one of the vampire novels where there isn't anything R18, which I much prefer. Otherwise, I don't have anything to nitpick. Overall, I'd give this novel a 3/5 maybe even lower. If the grammar and spelling are fixed then I would rate this a good 3.7/5. If the author goes back and rewrites some sentences then this book can be a good 4/5. Hopefully, the author improves their writing because I'm at chapter 48 and still have a long way to go.