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Review Detail of Foxner in My Vampire System

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I'm currently on chapter 1713. There is honestly way to much that has happened to truly write a short review here, so I'll just give thoughts on the overall WN. For this platform, this is a good story. However, if your use to books and web serials from other platforms, the WN scores low. Story wise, it's good. I think it was well thought out, planned, and depicted. It's about a human turned vampire as he slowly gains power to eventually rival the gods. It's told in a 3rd person omnipotent narrative where we hear the thoughts of other characters near the MC. I believe there are some improvements that need to be made to the narrative, although these thoughts might just be my bias towards this type of narrative. Character wise, it's honestly poor, at least in the most recent chapters. All female characters act the same, develop some kind of love interest in the MC and usually act shy about it, except for a few bold women. But the female characters don't feel real, they just feel like an accessory to the MC. Compared to WNs such as Beneath the Dragoneye Moons, it just shows that the story needs a bit more work. With writing quality, it feels very poor. There are many mistakes throughout all the chapters. It just feels rushed and like English wasn't the authors first language. About the story feeling rushed, I believe it's because the author doesn't have enough time. JKSmanga probably has to quickly right a chapter a day to fulfill webnovel's contract. Everything else is good.

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My Vampire System

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