Heyo. Foxner here. Just saying hello to the world... Hello~ P.S. My old username was Flounder62. Decided to change things up.
Yeah, it's a truly fascinating disorder. It gets even more complicated from there though, one of the things I was shocked about was that a system (the group of different personalities) can have a subsystem. For example, you can have an alter (one of the personalities) with there own version of DID. And the crazy thing about this subsystem is it is completely independent of the original system.
Welcome back and thanks for the chapter! I think I need a "last time on..."
Honestly, the majority of WNs on this platform are really 2-3 stars. But for what ever reason, so many people rate those WNs 5 stars. I've moved over to reading WNs on Royal Road since a lot of the stories are well written and people leave better reviews than on this platform.
Author, please update us on what's going on. I don't know if you left an announcement in the most recent chapters, but it doesn't help if not many people can see it due to being locked behind privilege. I love this story and I hope your doing alright. We just want to know what is going on.
I'm currently on chapter 1713. There is honestly way to much that has happened to truly write a short review here, so I'll just give thoughts on the overall WN. For this platform, this is a good story. However, if your use to books and web serials from other platforms, the WN scores low. Story wise, it's good. I think it was well thought out, planned, and depicted. It's about a human turned vampire as he slowly gains power to eventually rival the gods. It's told in a 3rd person omnipotent narrative where we hear the thoughts of other characters near the MC. I believe there are some improvements that need to be made to the narrative, although these thoughts might just be my bias towards this type of narrative. Character wise, it's honestly poor, at least in the most recent chapters. All female characters act the same, develop some kind of love interest in the MC and usually act shy about it, except for a few bold women. But the female characters don't feel real, they just feel like an accessory to the MC. Compared to WNs such as Beneath the Dragoneye Moons, it just shows that the story needs a bit more work. With writing quality, it feels very poor. There are many mistakes throughout all the chapters. It just feels rushed and like English wasn't the authors first language. About the story feeling rushed, I believe it's because the author doesn't have enough time. JKSmanga probably has to quickly right a chapter a day to fulfill webnovel's contract. Everything else is good.
I'm not sure why you gave it a 5 star rating. The translation is very bad. It feels like someone just decided to use Google translate. There is a lot of broken English (bust surprisingly it has good grammar). Conversations are super generic, almost cringy. I think the idea is good, but the execution is bad. I'd rate it properly somewhere between 3-4 stars (leaning closer to 4).
Tbh, it's bad PR for the Red Vampires who are friendly with humans to stay in the Red Vampire group. It would. e better for them to fracture and make an alliance with the Red Vampires.
Did you mean to write outside and public? The two kinda have the same meaning in this context.
Wait what? Did something happen in the past with a dedicated follower? Or is this about being a god?
Peter still gets upset about not being human? I feel like this is a thing that would have been worked out long ago...
Just a theory, but could Layla be the one running the red vampires and not Laxmus?
P.S. I want to add many layers to the story, along with a hidden mystery in which I will hid clues throughout the chapters.