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Foxner

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Heyo. Foxner here. Just saying hello to the world... Hello~ P.S. My old username was Flounder62. Decided to change things up.

2021-05-07 JoinedGlobal
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  • Foxner
    Foxner9d
    Replied to DaoistaKZbS0

    That's an interesting idea. There are other disorders in the dissociative branch of mental disorders. I could see Nike dissociating moments of violence and struggling to deal with those blanks in her memory.

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  • Foxner
    Foxner9d
    Replied to Shirubafokkusuhime

    Yeah, it's a truly fascinating disorder. It gets even more complicated from there though, one of the things I was shocked about was that a system (the group of different personalities) can have a subsystem. For example, you can have an alter (one of the personalities) with there own version of DID. And the crazy thing about this subsystem is it is completely independent of the original system.

    So that's where I'm at right now. For now, I'm still going to try to write chapters for the story, but I think it will just be sporadic and slow. I'm also thinking of putting this story on the back burner and starting a new novel that is far simpler and easier to write. I really need some advice on this story, so please give me your thoughts.
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  • Foxner
    Foxner20d
    Commented

    Welcome back and thanks for the chapter! I think I need a "last time on..."

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  • Foxner
    Foxner1mth
    Replied to Dragon912

    Honestly, the majority of WNs on this platform are really 2-3 stars. But for what ever reason, so many people rate those WNs 5 stars. I've moved over to reading WNs on Royal Road since a lot of the stories are well written and people leave better reviews than on this platform.

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  • Foxner
    Foxner1mth
    Replied to Ethan_Holland_9001

    Author, please update us on what's going on. I don't know if you left an announcement in the most recent chapters, but it doesn't help if not many people can see it due to being locked behind privilege. I love this story and I hope your doing alright. We just want to know what is going on.

    Ch 463 Chapter 463: Horrifying Swamp!
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  • Foxner
    Foxner1mth
    Posted

    I'm currently on chapter 1713. There is honestly way to much that has happened to truly write a short review here, so I'll just give thoughts on the overall WN. For this platform, this is a good story. However, if your use to books and web serials from other platforms, the WN scores low. Story wise, it's good. I think it was well thought out, planned, and depicted. It's about a human turned vampire as he slowly gains power to eventually rival the gods. It's told in a 3rd person omnipotent narrative where we hear the thoughts of other characters near the MC. I believe there are some improvements that need to be made to the narrative, although these thoughts might just be my bias towards this type of narrative. Character wise, it's honestly poor, at least in the most recent chapters. All female characters act the same, develop some kind of love interest in the MC and usually act shy about it, except for a few bold women. But the female characters don't feel real, they just feel like an accessory to the MC. Compared to WNs such as Beneath the Dragoneye Moons, it just shows that the story needs a bit more work. With writing quality, it feels very poor. There are many mistakes throughout all the chapters. It just feels rushed and like English wasn't the authors first language. About the story feeling rushed, I believe it's because the author doesn't have enough time. JKSmanga probably has to quickly right a chapter a day to fulfill webnovel's contract. Everything else is good.

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  • Foxner
    Foxner2mth
    Commented
    "Five? Didn't you hear me? You will need a whole army to make me serious." Quinn repeated his words, this time his eyes glowing red.
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  • Foxner
    Foxner4mth
    Commented

    This is honestly really awful of Elysia. She decided to go to an amusement park while people are fighting the Ruvoid monsters and risking their lives.

    Ch 594 Have a Little Fun (1)
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  • Foxner
    Foxner4mth
    Replied to Fam_Lit

    I'm not sure why you gave it a 5 star rating. The translation is very bad. It feels like someone just decided to use Google translate. There is a lot of broken English (bust surprisingly it has good grammar). Conversations are super generic, almost cringy. I think the idea is good, but the execution is bad. I'd rate it properly somewhere between 3-4 stars (leaning closer to 4).

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  • Foxner
    Foxner4mth
    Commented

    Tbh, it's bad PR for the Red Vampires who are friendly with humans to stay in the Red Vampire group. It would. e better for them to fracture and make an alliance with the Red Vampires.

    However, the Red Vampires were well aware of what was going on in their group. The divide from within that could tear them apart, which was why they had proceeded to do this.
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  • Foxner
    Foxner4mth
    Commented

    Did you mean to write outside and public? The two kinda have the same meaning in this context.

    The two groups were to work together on this special mission to bring them closer together. To the outside and public, the Red vampires appeared as one group, and it seemed whoever this leader or the leaders were, they wanted it to appear this way.
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  • Foxner
    Foxner4mth
    Commented

    Wait what? Did something happen in the past with a dedicated follower? Or is this about being a god?

    Hearing the word dedicated follower made Quinn think about the system. Was it a coincidence?
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  • Foxner
    Foxner4mth
    Commented

    Peter still gets upset about not being human? I feel like this is a thing that would have been worked out long ago...

    Upon hearing those words, Peter's smile quickly disappeared. Although he knew that she meant nothing by those words as Lucia had no idea what Peter was, it made him realise once again that he was no longer a human.
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  • Foxner
    Foxner4mth
    Commented

    Just a theory, but could Layla be the one running the red vampires and not Laxmus?

    "Those…masks," Quinn said.
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  • Foxner
    Foxner4mth
    Replied to DaoistpvzUxM

    What?

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  • Foxner
    Foxner4mth
    Commented

    P.S. I want to add many layers to the story, along with a hidden mystery in which I will hid clues throughout the chapters.

    (AN: The story will continue on here, where Nike has a flashback of her time in the village and include some of the stuff in the original chapters. It will then possibly follow the same things that happened after the lab. This is a draft, so no promises. Hopefully, this shows that the story can be massively improved.)
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  • Foxner
    Foxner5mth
    Replied to ElPrincipeAustral

    I think there will be more Helen's since they drained her bone dry. Plus she was the strongest out of the captured, which was what they were looking for.

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  • Foxner
    Foxner5mth
    Commented

    My sadness is immeasurable...

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  • Foxner
    Foxner5mth
    Replied to XiiiTai

    My sadness is immeasurable...

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  • Foxner
    Foxner5mth
    Replied to BeetleB

    I'm going to cry if they start using Helen's power 🥺

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