Review Detail of WinterTimeCrime in My Vampire System

Don't know what passed for the WSA Awards last year, but this isn't what I'd call 'Gold tier' material. If I saw this on the Potential Starlet or New Tropes in Original Novels, THEN I'd say was acceptable but there are just too many things that make this lackluster and interesting to read. First off, upon reading the first few chapters I don't find the MC interesting at all. The "bullied as a kid, parents die, pity me" party has been played out. Even modern Isekai anime/manga doesn't do this anymore as it's like watching a reverse Redo of Healer -- readers have a scouter for this type of stuff lol. We can gauge that this guy is going to get some special power or ability and grow. But wait... Where's the growth? I skip a few chapters here and there and he's still the same DUNCE from the first few chapters. If there was ANY character development it isn't apparent. The diction, flow, and sentence structure are flawed like, for a No. 1-- it isn't even funny. I'd think by this point in time he'd get an editor or something because I couldn't even finish the third chapter. I hope we see some decent stories this year in comparison to this. And they aren't judged on their commerciality, because reading the comments the readers feel scammed lol. Maybe it's a generation issue, but we need something better to bring people to the platform.