Review Detail of Dao_Executor in My Vampire System
Review detail
Last time I read №1 ranking novel it was Lord of Mysteries, so finding that this garbage is what replaced it is really sad. The only decent thing for this novel is some world-background concepts but since they all actually 'stolen' from another novels there's really nothing of worth left.. And there's some aspects of the story.. if you think about them seriously they will makes no sense at all.. actually they're borderline insane. P.S. Also, for me, while I'm furthest from being a 'grammarnzi'(hundreds of mted novels), but constant messing of them/their/they're/then/than really got me like who the fuk wrote this.. college crakhead? turned out it was school student... who the fuk vote this novel up to the 1 place every week???
My Vampire System
JKSManga
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Well with all this messed they/their/etc when I saw some random comments about finishing school or smtn it was like sudden enlightenment, but looks like I was wrong. Actually it makes everything really much worse. There's some complete nonsense in your story: 1. Everyone on Earth compulsory drafted at 16+ yet all we have is 8?11? bases with 2000 students per base? what? Hope I just skipped part that explained it. 2. One of the most powerful(influential) humans in this world almost died to bunch of kids because he has no protection(super advanced tech everywhere btw) except for his bodyguards? Actually all this situation/plot/arc with truedream is just beyond me, couldn't read past this. Hope you will put more thought into your next work.
JKSManga:Im a school teacher, not a school student haha, I hope you enjoy other stories on the site and have a nice day. :))) Spread positivity not negativity. It will help you fell better.
dude you shouldnt even be talking its just a book its not like you need to make him feel bad for putting time and effort into making this book for people to read you should just shut up and if you think its trash try making 4 books and 1 comic book, Just stay at your level he could be doing something else but he writes book so you should just shut up
JKSManga:Im a school teacher, not a school student haha, I hope you enjoy other stories on the site and have a nice day. :))) Spread positivity not negativity. It will help you fell better.
Dao_Executor:Also if you liked this story you should try Monarch of Evernight it's like this story but on steroids, and much much better in every aspect.