Review Detail of LordRhyolith in My Vampire System

Binged the story in one go and I must say that I was pleasantly entertained by it. So, I can definitely recommend it! The mc starts off as a bit of a foolish character, but that is understandable given his background and that he didn't have had the best life in school. He is a lonely orphan as well, and the world isn't exactly the friendliest environment. He is basically just another brick in the wall and not a super-genius makes girls moan with excitement. Yet, the protagonist manages to develop and he slowly becomes wittier as time passes, and I feel that he did a really good progress up until chapter 57. The world itself is also a rather grimdark dog-eats-dog kind of environment where the strong lord over the weak. Its the breeding ground for raving megalomaniacs with delusions of grandeur, but also a place full of people that suffer under the rule of 'might makes right' So people tend to be opportunistic. Benevolence exist, but it isn't a trait shared by the majority of the population. Side characters are also nice so far. There are enough different types that it remains interesting to see how they will develop and where they will end. Grammar and so on is ok, no glaring mistakes or anything bothersome. Sure, there is room for improvement - but that is a given. I can see how the skills of the author slowly become better as the story progresses. All in all, a solid story for everyone that looks for a world where people have special powers, can level up, an mc with a system, and... possibly dungeons? Thanks for sharing your work, Sir. Author!