there is a dude who is godlike and then you have some ants trying to make the story work...read as 30% of the chapters are either his collection of skills or him casting skills endlessly and beating anythin and anyone ...i have done this in a game called Lineage2 and is wonderful ..for some time then you get bored and go to a competitive server where there is an actual challenge..xd This book feels like a noob who was never good at rpg games sat down and started writing ...sry author but dont think like a noob give your character something to overcome...
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