Review Detail of 29kiki in Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
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The mc is a little dumb,he's not what I call careful because there is nothing to be careful at,you don't know exactly why he want to be low-key,you don't see the danger. When you want to show the mc has a need to be careful,show us the danger,the reason why he need to be careful and not paranoid assumptions. We can't see the danger,being overly careful is just buying the story time because the author don't know how to make the mc not too OP so he make petty excuses such as "carefulness" we don't need. The mc can have more ressources with being libelled as a genius than losing time in weak dungeons.
Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
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You know that the guy just became a hunter? I mean, Have seen how politicians and militaries treat uncontrollable assets, Noah, is a nuclear weapon, even more so since he is the only one, And if, if he becomes know so soon, he would be controlled, carfelly give the right skills, and put on a leash, your review was truthfull, I agree with some points, but like any person argueing for the "MC's should not hide their potential", it has its problems
Not expose his infinite mana but at least make himself a genius to have a background,Here the story is slow purposely,because an op ability is though to use in a story without ruining it. But the mc always stay alone,do nothing but little dungeons.
TheGuyWhoTried:You know that the guy just became a hunter? I mean, Have seen how politicians and militaries treat uncontrollable assets, Noah, is a nuclear weapon, even more so since he is the only one, And if, if he becomes know so soon, he would be controlled, carfelly give the right skills, and put on a leash, your review was truthfull, I agree with some points, but like any person argueing for the "MC's should not hide their potential", it has its problems
29kiki:Not expose his infinite mana but at least make himself a genius to have a background,Here the story is slow purposely,because an op ability is though to use in a story without ruining it. But the mc always stay alone,do nothing but little dungeons.