So far, I have read 7 chapters and will read the rest later. Saving your book to my library. I find the story captivating. The writing quality is good, the Stability of updates is equally good. The story is developing well. The character of Xia is strong. How can her aunt offer her help if she wants to run away? The world background is well defined. A few typos and some grammatical mistakes, thought they do not interfere with the flow of the story. I would suggest running your material through an online grammar checker before publishing it. I do that and in case I don't then I land up with lots of mistakes. All the best.
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