Review Detail of Ephraim_Williams in Searching for Andromeda

Item: Searching for Andromeda
Rating: 3

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Ephraim_WilliamsLv123yrEphraim_Williams

Its getting there, but the author is a little helter-skelter. Hard to follow details sometimes and lacks enough proofreading and coherence. Good story and plot, but a little slow starting. So many details, yet not coherent, nor are flashbacks and asides done well.

Searching for Andromeda

Chainslock

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ChainslockAuthorChainslock

Oh... I apologize for the lackluster writing. And thank you for reading, as well! I hope you can still read the story despite these setbacks. I’ll take note of your review and try to apply them to the current chapters and edit the others when I have the time. Thank you so much for the critique!

3yr