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1100 chapters in and it keeps getting better and better. relatable, understandable characters, great story movement (never filling or going slow), real life issues, traumas, and moral dilemmas, and so much lore, fantasy, mythology, and sci-fi packed into one amazing story. I need the fully designed and curated hardback version of this book!!!
I am four chapters in, and here is my first impression. the writing quality definitely needs some help. The author would do well to research how point of view shifts happen naturally instead of labeling it. also try to get a couple editors. the story is being well-developed, following a similar plot of many other stories. there's a decent amount of background and character design in the first four chapters that allow us to get a good picture of things that are going around. Not the greatest, but definitely good for an ******* writer.
is she really in the past or is she in the future with much knowledge lost to time????
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