Review Detail of bald_daoist in Searching for Andromeda

This has huge potential and the story is really good. The way the novel is written feels like it was done by a professional author. Kudos to the author for this. The only downside for ME here is when changing the point of view. I feel like you can improve on that part such as how he reacts/feels when that happened instead of copying what was already written? This is just my opinion though.