Review Detail of Explorer_Avalon in Subordination system

Item: Subordination system
Rating: 4.6

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Explorer_AvalonLv23yrExplorer_Avalon

the whole premise is quite original but it's sad that main character isn't actively doing things to streghten himself like getting knowledge how to build a gun then ordering things and parts for it going into the game to simply assemble it also since magic exist wouldn't be possible to create magic tool that works just like a gun?

Subordination system

a_regular_student

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a_regular_studentAuthora_regular_student

Ohhh I like your ideas! Thank you for letting me know what you think! Though it all sounds really interesting I'm taking a slower approach to this story, so even if something like a magic gun is implemented it will come a bit later in the story. Thanks for your review!

3yr