Review Detail of Astralek in Hangry Potter

Its a pretty good Harry Potter fanfiction. The grammar and orthography are fine. The story isn't forced, character development is a bit weak but thats alright. It feels rushed a bit. My biggest problem with the book is that the protagonist loves tossing money at things to make them go away. Ridiculous amounts of money. The issue is he is supposed to be lacking funds when doing this. At one point he offered to employ a journalist for 250-350 galleons a month to write what he tells her. Then he gave her 500 galleons right afterwards because she didn't want to write what he paid her to do! Furthermore, she does almost nothing in the story for how much she's paid. Thats about a thousand galleons wasted on a sassy, reluctant blogger that won't write his blogs!