Review Detail of Noken in Playing One Piece

Yeah it’s another system novel with an OP MC... But seriously, this one is worth it. The grammar is good, the author has a lot of knowledge about the One Piece world, the MC is not an edgy psycho with a harem (like most other novels of the genre), the pace is good and the fight scenes are very well constructed. The only problem, IMO, is that the MC seems a bit too OP right now. I don’t think there’s anyone else that can be a threat to him with his broken skills, and this is usually the downfall point of most fanfictions. Without any challenges the stories start to get really boring to read, it’s just the MC playing with people a thousand times weaker than himself... Well Author, even if you drop the story here I would still consider it the best One Piece fanfiction on WebNovel so far. If you’re truly looking for feedback to improve your writing, I’d suggest you to make the MC suffer a bit on your future works, give them more threats and challenges to overcome. If he only wins and easily beats the opponents every time, it doesn’t create a meaninful impact to your readers, it’s much better to make the MC lose and learn something from it sometimes.