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Playing One Piece

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What is Playing One Piece

Read โ€˜Playing One Pieceโ€™ Online for Free, written by the author absurdmorbidity, This book is a Anime & Comics Fanfic, covering ACTION Fanfiction, REINCARNATION Fan Fiction, SYSTEM Fanfiction Net, and the synopsis is: A young man wakes up on an island with no memories of himself or his loved ones. All he has are memories not related to ...

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A young man wakes up on an island with no memories of himself or his loved ones. All he has are memories not related to his personal life and a message introducing him to his new life. A few notes before you read this Fanfic. It's not going to be a rushed story. It's going to take time and go through things slowly. One Piece world only, no world traveling. While the Main Character will be strong, he will not be OP for quite a while. Be prepared to wait for it. The story will be following Luffy and the others for a while. This is for two reasons, one it helps me write and two, the Main Character actually has a valid motivation for doing so. No harem. Yes, the System is loosely based on 'The Gamer' but isn't a direct copy and is modified to suit my needs for my story. So while it might seem similar it is NOT the same. I do not own One Piece or any of the characters. All rights belong to their respective owners. I only own the Original Character. Prerelease Chapters here: patreon.com/playingnovels

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Rosa_Fisher ยท History
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Regal Ascension: God's Epoch

The Old Ghost of thousand deaths roamed the world seeking life. He wields his weapon for the sake of life and for the sake of power. He is the one who stands on top. He is the one who carves the worlds. He is the one who slew billions, and yet he was one who advocates life. โ€œThe Celestial Nether Phoenix shall give life. โ€œThe Valhalla will bow down to me, the Hammer of Lightning shall break under my presence. โ€œThe Serpent God that circles the continent of Mu, shalt become my ring.โ€ Pursuit and power coincide; life and death is a cycle; myths and legends are real. To protect life is to have power, to have power is to procure death, and to procure death is to face life. === Disclaimer: The cover is not mine; all rights reserve to the artists, message me if you want me to take it down. Also, as you can see from the synopsis, the story is not all Chinese myth base (but is heavily influenced by it) as I have been reading other mythologies and watching anime. And most of them will be integrated into one big pot of different cultures and myths, this includes different beasts and monsters from those different places. So if I ever offend anyone with me mixing their hometown legends and myths please accept my apologies as it is my interpretation of them...and with that said, I shall now read however I want. Oh yeah, this is not harem, nor the MC a sexual beast who will fuck any pussy, this is not an erotica.

Simple_Dynasty ยท Eastern
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Table of Contents
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Volume 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 :The East Blue
Volume 2 :Alabasta
Volume 3 :Skypeia and Beyond
Volume 4 :WAR!
Volume 5 :New Adventure

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DreamCrusher101
DreamCrusher101Lv5DreamCrusher101

This story is so trashy the mc is so passive just to keep the plot going this story is just a carbon copy of one piece in point of view of the mc dont be fooled by ranking of this book this just plain copy right

One_Punch_Boyy
One_Punch_BoyyLv10One_Punch_Boyy

it's just a carbon copy of one piece, nothing more nothing less, a one piece from a different perspective. I thought that after skypea he would go the **** away from the crew and start a real story but welp now he will remain with them till the 2 years separation of the crew then with the excuse of beginning equal from what I understood he will keep being with them... basically a one piece less interesting and from another perspective

The_Airojab
The_AirojabLv6The_Airojab

Read till chapter 28, Tried reading as much as could, but I can read no more, there isn't even a proper story Developent so far, its just the orignal One Piece + an add on Mc, No Original story no plot, no proper additions no nothing. Really hoped to give this one a better rating, but after reading so far I feel its just better to read the original one once again, its not like there is much difference to begin with.

Im_Shrey
Im_ShreyLv5Im_Shrey

Nice story with excellent service. I like having smart, cunning Mc. Long chapters.๐Ÿ‘ I hope you will continue to write more chapters..๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘

MagicSand
MagicSandLv6MagicSand

A good with a solid story and character building FanFic Don't give up on this one Thank you author-san, this kind and type of story make me nostalgic of good old novel fic(Bleached Multiverse, A Knight Will, Heroic Myth, Highschool Of Heroes, In Different World With Naruto System', etc...) # NoOffenceAuthor-san

YourGrandpa
YourGrandpaLv2YourGrandpa

From what I've seen in the reviews this novel is pretty good. Oh damn...I never knew you needed at least 140 characters to make a review. Anyways keep up the good work man. Im looking forward to how this is going

Yakine_Music
Yakine_MusicLv1Yakine_Music

never give up please don't stop like others your special and the story development are insane keep going menโค๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ can't wait for others chapters

Dragon_King_Marcel
Dragon_King_MarcelLv4Dragon_King_Marcel

Hope u dont drop IT Rare to find good one piece fanfic ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

CopenhagenF5
CopenhagenF5Lv11CopenhagenF5

3/3/2/2/2: 2.4 Writing: 3, the quality is average at best, the author is basically rewriting One Piece with his OG-MC's POV, with a couple of chapters, in the beginning, setting the tone and basic info. There are some consistent error that has not been fixed, like belly-> Beli for the currency, Updates: 3, constant, albeit every 2-4 days release of a new chapter. Story Dev: 2, going to give it a 2 because, if you subtract what is already canon for One Piece, you get no real deviation from canon, besides the OG-MC's thoughts, actions, and it's basically reading One Piece in another POV. Char Design, 2, a mix of The Gamer vibes, with a system and questline, but only 'expand' on OG-MC, although it is in the infancy, I can only recall OG-MC trying to train/explain to the other chars about some technique that would be useful in the future. World Background: 2, What world background? Sure, you got normal One Piece lore and info, but that's about it, think you, reading and finishing One Piece, and explaining the plot back to one who has not read it. And someone else is listening to what you are explaining but has the about the same level of understanding of the plot. Final Thoughts: I can see this novel as being slow, (both update speed, and novel development, but I don't judge negatively to a slowly releasing novel) but take the time to either make this cannon part interesting, and not a reread of cannon in a different POV, or skip the beginnings of One Piece, to perhaps right before White Beard arc, or after the 2yrs as clearly OG-MC is letting what is cannon playout with no real original content/changes to the story. It is a decently-written novel to read, if you want a refresh of the plot of One Piece, told by an Extra-Character point-of-view, but currently, not my cup of tea,

DemonGodHiatus
DemonGodHiatusLv12DemonGodHiatus

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Primordiales
PrimordialesLv3Primordiales

The boring truth, it is only One Piece only with one more secondary character, there are no changes so far apart from some people that the MC defeats, if you want to see a summary of one piece with a secondary character just read it, the truth expected more but I suppose which was to be expected there are no One piece stories where the MC doesn't follow the canon at least he's better than the disgusting fanfic where the Mc told him he came from another world and the author self-bosses the MC. So if you like one piece you will surely read it even if it is boring to read what you already saw, if you come for an original fanfic where there is nothing about the conon then go here it is all canonical and there is not much change, have a good morning

YgNear
YgNearLv3YgNear

Mc is very fanboy one piece Has no personality He likes to take orders............... ................................................................................................................................

CarrotOnTheStick
CarrotOnTheStickLv1CarrotOnTheStick

Don't waste your time kids, this is just a rip-off story to the One Piece, nothing change, his just too passive to care. He always gives reasoned, but the reasoning doesn't add-up towards his first objective, so why still write!? This story is so boring that you always knew what going to happen, it's just carbon ****. Waste, the Author knew how to write but not to make a great story.

Vitor_Gamer_Br
Vitor_Gamer_BrLv4Vitor_Gamer_Br

๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv10DarthVegito

Starts off good but then starts to go downhill and once they get to sabody it becomes absolute dogsh*t lol the MC is a joke and just a beta dumba**, too many things are just being forced and just all together it is a HUGE waste of time And just a garbage fanfic

Iring_na_itom
Iring_na_itomLv4Iring_na_itom

well if you like a story of a side character this story is for you ๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŽ‰ all the mc did is for the sake of the crew like a babysitter.. its good for wasting your time if you don't have anything to do.. its just like reading original one piece on side characters point of view .

Lothlo91
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TypeVos
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Snooozer
SnooozerLv2Snooozer

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

UgandanWebKnovels
UgandanWebKnovelsLv3UgandanWebKnovels

Pleasd dont drop this story if you need funding i will pay for this story too keep going You may ask why but its because ITS NO HAREM FINALLY A AUTHOR THAT DOESNT CARE ABQOUT BIG OVERLY HUGE TITIES AND DISPORPORTIONATE BODY WOMEN

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