Review Detail of dumdum007 in Godsmithing Otaku

I kinda like the plot though I don't usually read gaming stories. but I am hooked by this one. It has a unique plot along with good descriptions of the background world. The author has done a good job so far and I look forward to reading more, Just a little suggestion for you... try not using a lot of ellipses and be more descriptive about the MC. Instead of just telling things, try to elaborate things more. I look forward to new chapters ❤❤❤