Review Detail of Yusra_Sheikh in Rebirth, but why?

So I started reading this book for light reading and I like the genre. But it has too many grammatical and sentence errors. It feels like too much stuff is going on and the story build up is not properly executed. The basic story is nice but I think the author can work on her writing and execution. I hope the author doesn’t get discouraged by my comment. I hope you keep on improving and keep on writing.