Review Detail of sighduck in Death Guns In Another World

Really enjoy the story. I have some minor gripes on characters feeling somewhat flat, but nothing major. My big complaint is that the writing is sloppy. At least as of 700 chapters in. Lots of broken sentences where a key word may be missing (“Alex is ____ a masochist” where the ___ indicates a missing ‘not’). It happens way too often. Also, the status screen dumps are frustrating. I don’t to see everything. Just hilight the changes instead of pasting the entire thing and then writing a paragraph about the changes. Overall I do enjoy this story though.