Review Detail of Thereader_ in Death Guns In Another World

this novel has so much potential to be too 20 at least but what separates this from the novels in that category is the writing quality, not that in itself is poor but the conversations between the characters lack depth and substance, Alex and his weapon are always teasing each other, it makes even the most serious situations loose their substance plus the teasing is honestly annoying to read and happens too frequently. the conversations between Alex and glacier is honestly too cheeky and there can be a bit of over explanation for things that are already obvious. He pace of leveling up is okay but what happens while he's leveling us is honestly quite boring, from the goblins to the ant queen, I feel like too much time was spent on those parts even though they were important bits of the story. This novel givese alot of Arifureta vibes, infact the similarities are way too much for this not to have been inspired by that. Another thing is that the kids take their death too lightly🙂, no one just dies , goes to a new world and boom they're previous life doesn't matter. none of them cried for their family they left behind or stuff like that which should be normal for kids their age. thats why I said the novel lacks depth. It's fun to read no doubt and it has interesting elements to keep readers interested especially because of the use of common isekai troupes. but this novel will never reach top 30 if it doesn't improve on its character depth and realism. Alex gave glacier his mother's name and the next day he's already called her Alexandra. he's been calling her glacier for like 2 weeks and all of a sudden even without asking her if it was okay to call her something else, or she asking him why the name change. it just happens like we the readers are supposed to just go with it but realistically you don't just change the way you call someone and they themselves don't question it or react. of course I know this is fiction but you can't abitrarily throw away realistic elements from it. that's one of the many interactions between MC and support MC that makes this novels quality subpar to novels like Supreme Magus. I hope the author sees this and understands where I'm coming from. I'm fan of this word and I've read over 150 chaps so far