hi author I'm new here hehe. so, as I was reading your story I seem to encounter a lot of redundant words in a single paragraph like 'because'. it's ruining the flow of words, can you kindly avoid doing that in the future? thanks in advance. anyway, I'm still below chapter 50. good day.
XiaoKongxu
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