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Moonrose_1312hCommentedSunny vs. Mad Prince Jet vs. Undying Slaughter Mordred vs. Soul Stealer ??? vs. Dread Lord ??? vs. Torment ??? vs. Devouring Beast just a guess
Sunny had to destroy a dire enemy — the forces of Defilement populating the corrupted city of Verge and the Six Plagues that ruled it. Dread Lord, Torment, Undying Slaughter, Soul Stealer, Devouring Beast… and Mad Prince.- Moonrose_132mthCommented
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"Are you sure about that? Whenever men see me with her, they actually want to kill me and take her for themselves." - Moonrose_134mthCommented
The reality of the world.
It was Leonel's fault. Had he not been unreasonable and caused so much chaos, the Adurna family would have never grasped the chance to enter the Zone and their team would have been whole and complete. But, because of his own selfish desires, he actually caused the death of so many. - Moonrose_134mthPosted
to the author~Hi! Hello! I just want to say you should not overwork yourself. I know that there is a quota for writers like you but ease up a bit.I want to tell you that your story is great. It's one of the few stories that got me hooked immediately after just one chapter. The composition of your words are astonishing. The way you write, the grammar, the narration of the the story is truly amazing. You can easily tell which is which when when its POVs are switching. Unfortunately, really, I notice that your writing style change a bit - just a little bit - after you gave those bonus chapters. I tried to not mind those changes but it's piling up. I'm sorry I can't help it. The essence of the story, the thrill it gave to the readers is slowly getting less and less. Sure the fighting scenes are awesome, I'll give you that. But the mysterious effect of each word, the trick for each sentences so that it can use the loopholes can be visibly seen by someone like me whose slow to understand what is being implied! That being said the should not be named are getting named! The 'if he just saw this and that' and 'the like this and the this like that'!Plus the chapter is getting shorter compare to first tens of chapters. 😭I'm sorry.As I was saying, you don't have to do those many chapters if your getting stressed and crammed for it. Readers are contented if they get to read to the next chapter and their expectations are met and frustrated if not. That's the life of readers. I bet you already know that. So think about your mental health and how it affect you. I just wish that your writing style get back to how it first been. Thank you Good luck ~
- Moonrose_136mthCommented
he's crazily talented
"For now, he seems to be a good choice. He's only sixteen, so his age matches the under 25 requirement from seven years in the future. Still, let's see how he performs in the test first. After all, he hasn't measurably passed the previous tests. I can't tell yet whether he really has some talent or if he's just crazy." - Moonrose_131yrCommented
you have a point
"As I said before, life is going well for us vampires, and if we wish to keep it that way, then we need to protect ourselves. As we have grown stronger and gathered more resources, there will be those that will wish to steal what we have." - Moonrose_131yrCommented
ahh not good. please don't hesitate you'll be killed if you do that
She thrust the spear, but pulled back at the last second, letting the tip only slightly touch the man. His whole body was lighting up, but she needed to hold it in place for a few seconds before the man would pass out. - Moonrose_131yrCommentedCh 2037 The Power of a Guard (Part 2)
- Moonrose_131yrCommentedCh 2008 The current situation (Part 1)
- Moonrose_131yrCommentedCh 521 The Trio acts!
- Moonrose_131yrCommentedCh 1988 World ceremony
- Moonrose_131yrCommentedCh 338 A Mistake
- Moonrose_131yrReplied to Daoist652285
sauce pls
[Those marked due to a Forced Bond will be the first people to be targeted during a full moon.] - Moonrose_131yrReplied to K_Log
thanks much
Tristan sighed, looked at the tallest boy, and said. "Okay, I will now call you Rugrats 1." He looked for the second tallest child and named him Rugrats 2… He repeated the process all the way by their heights up to the two female children named Rugrats 6 and 7. After naming them all, Tristan realized he forgot about the half-unconscious boy, but he didn't want to go through the trouble of naming them again, so he named the last one Rugrats 8. - Moonrose_131yrReplied to K_Log
movie?
Tristan sighed, looked at the tallest boy, and said. "Okay, I will now call you Rugrats 1." He looked for the second tallest child and named him Rugrats 2… He repeated the process all the way by their heights up to the two female children named Rugrats 6 and 7. After naming them all, Tristan realized he forgot about the half-unconscious boy, but he didn't want to go through the trouble of naming them again, so he named the last one Rugrats 8. - Moonrose_131yrCommented
adoptive father
The sight of Layla firing shot after shot at the targets reminded Tristan of when their cop stepfather show them how to use guns just to show off his power and intimidate them. Fortunately, now it has become a useful lesson. - Moonrose_131yrReplied to Aushin
maybe they remove or forbid the use of it when relocate to another planet
What the man had shown him was a completely immersive VR game. One where you would put on the headset and your mind would be transported into that world. It was a technology the vampires already had and would use it for training themselves. - Moonrose_132yrReplied to SuperSpecialShumai
the one giving Xio missions?
"There's no time, we can't finish him off that quickly! We have to hide this area as quickly as possible. Do you want the Church to discover our secret?" The man with the gold mask growled angrily. - Moonrose_132yrCommented
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I didn't think in that direction… The World repeated Mr. Fool's sigh.