Review Detail of Jade_Woo in Douluo Dalu 1: Big Brother Of Ning Rongrong.

So This is pretty good but it has a few problem the grammer is weird at some point same for the conjugaison is hella weird sometimes too . English is probaly not the first language of the author so i dont blame him that mutch i hope he trys to correct his mistake . Apart from this the story is good and has potential just repeating my self i really hope he corrects his mistake so bye