Review Detail of Alessio4703 in Fleshcrafting Technomancer (Hiatus)

Author took a pause to add dept to the start of the story while it was still at an acceptably short go from the start, and for me this is a big show of effort and commitment of the author. I liked the world building the author has done until now, how he as done it, and the preparations that he laid for the future chapters. It's very good that while the story HAS a fast pace, it doesn't feel rushed and I personally love the planning the author has been doing for his story and repute this one's start more attractive than Profane Prince's. I'm sure that if he continues like this, with what he has foreshadowed, there will be great chapters to come. On a note, I will say that the content of "in-dept-plot" has been a bit lacking in these first chapters, but I am pretty sure the author will male it up to us with a few great chapters in the near future ;)