Mushoku Impact, another story by this same author, specifically one set in Mushoku Tensei with some Genshin Impact characters and an OC

She has not just fallen, she has fallen to the bottom and then started digging deeper...

Never have truer words been spoken

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+1, I agree wholeheartedly

I don't understand how you are managing to make something like 15 comments about this situation on this chapter without even once thinking ahout the emotional side of things. They are friends, she is confessing to him and she kissed him in a NON-FORCEFUL way(as the author described) and not with any malicious thought, but because of the insecurities typical of teenagers which stop them from managing to express their emotion in a vocal way. So nervousness and shyness to make it short. Regarldess of how he reacted, and even regardless of their gender(even if their genders were switched I still think it wouldn't be rape, and anyone who does should reflect on how modern their views on relationships are), I think such a situation can't be called rape or even sexual assault(regardless of the fact that in nations like the USA this happens, but there are many things that happen in our society which are wrong, of that there is no doubt). IT IS RIGHT to think that you should ask for permission before kissing someone, and doing it in an impulsive even if non-forceful manner is stupid(note: stupid, not a crime or disgusting or demeaning for someone), but that doesn't mean you should be this aggressive toward this action. I think it in no way represents an example of sexually aggressive behaviour being justified by society's views, it is instead just the imperfect nature of humans that make us behave in sometimes stupid way, like trying to communicate our love to someone with a kiss in the mouth instead of just saying it, forgetting our behaviour may just confuse the other person. Hell, in this case they are even minors and the socially awkward interaction is even more justified, and regardless of liking the kiss or not, I feel anyone who in the same situation who would feel sexually assaulted is just some self-absorbed prick who doesn't understand how human interactions are easily prone to fallacy. I can even understand why you would dislike this character's behaviour, but just this single action doesn't prove she is a raper. Instead her train of thought just make her seem a teenager coming to a rushed decision and being swept up by her own feelings. It happens. In the real world. People don't get scarred mentally from it when it's not done by malicious people and facts are properly conveyed, trust me.

he did specify that he would have complications "if he took the chance"

achievement unlocked: addicted to EPICness

achievement unlocked: too much good can be bad, after all!

hype for the next chapters, this novel is really good, keep it up!

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I have read this story and personally enjoyed it. At the start I thought it was going to be a "management novel" with monster girls, with a lot of data and whatnot, but after a but I just enjoyed it for the laid-back feeling it had. I still don't understand if you were inspired from this story by the "Monster Girl Encyclopedia"(I am guessing yes because the premise is just so similar, but I'm not completely sure)but I didn't feel it as lacking too much, as you say. If I must think of something, you could make a more in-depth background for the main characters of the story to characterize them more, and maybe, other than thinking about the rogue stort development, you could think about how the main character grows in the plot?I don't know if I have been of help, I'm more of a reader than a writer but I sincerely hope after you rewrite this you feel proud about it!You have my support author!

I like it when people forget the main character's motivations and jump to conclusions...it shows how little forethought was put in this comment. I will say this just as a reminder, but doing something for a reward he needs(the points) is not the definition of "running dog", and he would have to intervene even if not paid, simply because he needs Academy City for his plan to spread technology...and this was even said multiple times, really. I am truly appalled at how someone could read more than 300 chapters of this story and still come to this conclusion...

Today I give you the title "Cliff God" Aidka!Accept it graciously and give us more (cliffhangerish) chapters!!

Thanks for the good chapters, but that DAMN CLIFFHANGER stimgs my heart!

I think using the dxd world as a setting and giving it a bit of a personal touch: a bit more cruelty, no Issei harem(or better yet no Issei in general), way less stupid villains and lazy higher-ups which do nothing all the time..in general take the setting and get the plot holes out of it, then fill it however you want(even merging a few good points of danmachi may be a good idea if you feel like it). Still your descriptions until now of his homeworld are not much but still a bit restrictive...if you want to retcon it to have a neater plot to work with, I don't think people would feel too upset about it

I would say that you can take dxd and danmachi both as a base, but you would have to shake it up a bit to make it work, I don't think any of these two would work "vanilla", dxd being too childish and danmachi being a bit difficult to see as a modern world with angels and demons

good chapter, good character development, good immersion in a character's way of thinking. we need more like this👍

it's done on purpose. It'a pun on "if to laugh or cry"