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I like this story very much, can't stop reading. The story is great but I would rate the writing as 4 star, it's because sometimes the description is too long and it made me a little bored, I suggest the author to make it a little shorter. But other than that this book is great and I recommend it to the readers.

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I transmigrated to a mafia character from a BL Dark novel!

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Thanks for the review! I'll try to follow the advice... it's just that in my mind I think it's necessary to know or I'm like "if I don't put it here I'll forget it in the future". Thanks for the review and I hope to improve a little more in the future. SEE YA!