FollOwing along at times can be a liitle confusing but i Stuck with it and also found the story to be more interesting In the later chaptera
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LIKEHello, thank you very much for the feedback. Would it be possible for you to point out an example for me? I want to know what you found confusing so that when I start editing the chapters once the book finishes by November end, I could improve on that point? Thank you once again for giving the book a chance!