honestly this author committed to taboos of writing. "The chosen one (prophesy, which keeps the story thin and predefined) and the goal of killing the demon king( the ending and guarentee last 200 chapters of the story.) " you literally back yourself into a corner and are now forced to write a narrow path, which is so predictable only 1st time wuxia readers have a decent chance of sticking around. i read the other comments that say stick to 40+ chapters but when you only keep your trash chapters free and the "fixed part pay for" 9/10 will drop. good 1st try effort but i am sadly not your targeted audience. Suggest author becomes a reader and sees why the top 10 are the top 10.
ReincarnatedSaint
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LIKEThe biggest problem for me is the 8th grade syndrome comedy it has going on in it chapter after chapter after chapter... On top of this if he is supposed to be going to school to become a blacksmith then why hasn't the author written about the blacksmithing stuff and just jumps into a random adventure before even establishing his life as a blacksmith in training in the new school?