Review Detail of Darkshadow12 in Bloodlines of the Ancient Pantheons

How many chapters did you read bro? I think not many, judging by your review. If I wanted to write about the stars' life circle I would have googled it. Hope you will keep on reading, watching things from another perspective, considering that what you define 'plot holes' may be just some fantasy hints you probably didn't get. Regarding the 'writing', if you're referring to my grammar, I sincerely thank you for the advice, not having the presumption to be the best English writer, coming from Italy. Life's a journey, my friend, try to let yourself be transported by the wind, not making too much questions. Enjoy the rest of my novel :)

Actually your Grammer isn't that bad. The thing is, you describe some parts where there should be some more dialogues. It disrupts the immersive reading for a reader. It is true that I have not read that many chapters 😅, but I'll try to catch up to your current chapters. I recommend you to try some Free reedsy learning courses. You can Google it. Great courses for someone who is looking for an improvement in their writing.

Supernova is a selective stage , a star needs to be of certain mass to qualify for a supernova or novae Ours will just desolve out leaving behind a white dwarf

Supernova is a selective stage , a star needs to be of certain mass to qualify for a supernova or novae Ours will just desolve out leaving behind a white dwarf

You're certainly making me self-conscious about my own writing skills....

That's new info 🤔 The main point is the red Giant giant phase. Earth will be too hot to sustain human life at that time.

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Watch aperture video on how will Galaxy end

L'être humain est vraiment flippant. Dans cette phrase tout t'es dit. Bonne courage

thats not even the main point, when the sun becomes a red giant it's gonna directly engulf Earth into itself

yes just a puff.... that doesn't happen.

earth will be no more.

Whelp I just spent like 15 minutes typing out a response and my app crashed so I'm gonna be a lot briefer this time. Essentially, any civilization powerful enough to mess with the stars of another solar system would be like the gods of the gods of our gods, we wouldn't even be qualified to be specks of dust in front of them, they could do absolutely whatever they wanted to us and we likely wouldn't even realize and just think of them as forces of nature. I'll explain why below. According to your 'fantasy hints', the aliens somehow messed with our sun, which led to the premise of this novel. In order for a civilization to mess with the star of another solar system/galaxy, they would need to be at minimum a pseudo-'galactic civilization', meaning that they are at least a type 2.5 civilization on the Kardeshev Scale, and likely above 3. We (whenever I say we I am referring to humanity as a whole) have yet to even reach the qualifications of a type 1 civilization, we are currently about 4 orders of magnitudes of energy away from that classification. The gap between a type 1 and a type 2 civilization on the Kardeshev Scale is about 16 orders of magnitudes of energy, while the gap between a type 2 and a type 3 is about 11 orders of magnitude. Meaning that we are at a minimum about 26-31 full orders of magnitude of energy (likely even further) from these aliens. And keep in mind that the time taken to increase from one magnitude to another increases exponentially as the order increases (imagine the gap between going from thousands to millions and the gap from millions to billions, and notice how the gap increases by a massive amount every time. Imagine that 31 times, when our starting point is already at the tera level (trillions). It is estimated that for humans to reach the level of a type 3 civilization, it will take around 100 million years (human have only existed for about 200,000 years so far, so that's 500x the amount of time that humans have existed, assuming that we maintain a constant increase of 3% energy per year and there are no major disasters or problems we face, which is extremely unlikely). Even a mere type 1 civilization would appear to be gods to humans currently, while a type 2 civilization would appear to be gods to a type 1, and a type 2.5/3 would appear to be gods to a type 2 civilization (the gap between each number increases by multiple orders of magnitudes of logarithims as the numbers increase). Basically, any civilization able to mess with our Sun would be like the gods of the gods of our gods. We cannot even comprehend the technologies of a type 1 civilization currently. A type 3 would be able to mess around with us even more easily than we can mess around with Sims. We wouldn't even qualify to be specks of dust in front of a civilization like that, its likely that they wouldn't even recognize us as living creatures due to the massive incomprehensible gap between our two civilizations. And you are expecting these beings far beyond gods to mess with our sun in an attempt to somehow either manipulate or enslave or kill us, when they could do the same thing much more easily and efficiently. We most likely wouldn't even realize if they wanted to mess with us, since their technology and means would be so far beyond our wildest imaginations that we would just see it as a force of nature or just flat out not even notice. But yeah, we are just missing your 'fantasy hints' and misdefining 'plot holes'

I get were your coming from but its a book. first of all do you know what time this is set in no iy could be a point where the humans extracted stuff from the son and second, obviously ther might be some bad grammer the writer is from Italy and one of their first novels (one of any other, other than this one and the other one) also have some imagination its a book its not always gonna make sense (it might make sense later on fyi)

If ur worried about that stop reading novels a lot a novels don’t really make sense in turns of science. But where not in the real world are we no we’re in a fucking novel