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Review Detail of _EMI_ in Grandpa Universe In Multiverse [COMPLETE]

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_EMI_
_EMI_Lv44yr_EMI_

I am at chapter 51. 1. First of all, author made MC an old man who acts like a grandpa, so romance is thrown out of the equation. 2. MC is basically a puppet of God. He is overpowered, yet he has no power to decide his own fate. 3. He can't choose when he would leave the world he is randomly thrown into. As soon as the purity of any world reaches more than 90%, he is thrown out. 4. God just randomly gives MC an identity and past, which takes the whole adventure vibe out of the equation. 5. MC is apparently millions of times smarter than when he was human, yet he is content on being a puppet. 6. MC merely acts as an agent of god, so all the interactions are meaningless because after the world is purified, the only characters left would be God and MC. 7. Since MC is overpowered, there is little to almost no real action. 8. MC can only punish people based on their karmic points. Every moment of his life is controlled by god. MC is basically a slave who can't decide how to live his own life. That is very annoying. No romance. No sense of adventure. No action. Puppet/Slave MC. Unreasonable karma point system. Why would god grant him that position if MC can't even create a cake identity? How does god keep giving him millions if he can't enter the multiverse?

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Grandpa Universe In Multiverse [COMPLETE]

MisterImmortal

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MisterImmortal
MisterImmortalAuthorMisterImmortal

1. MC is employed by god. So obviously there will be rules and things out of MCs control. 2. This story is not about action. It's simple about helping whichever Universe he goes to. 3. He will eventually have a female partner. If you consider a harem as romance then that won't happen. 4. Seriously, God enslaving him? Dude, god gives the MC whatever he asks for. 5. Not being able to travel multiverse on his own choice is just an element of the novel. Otherwise, do you think MC would have left the awesome family he had created in Harry Potter world? Would he have left Edward and Hermione?. I don't know why you didn't like the settings of my novel. Everyone got a different taste so can't blame you. Thanks for reading though. 👌🏻

_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4_EMI_

I still think that this novel is above average and I am going to continue reading it, but I am just giving my honest review here. Didn't mean to offend you. Cheer up. It would make it a lot more easier if god had just left him alone. That element of novel is annoying.

MisterImmortal:1. MC is employed by god. So obviously there will be rules and things out of MCs control. 2. This story is not about action. It's simple about helping whichever Universe he goes to. 3. He will eventually have a female partner. If you consider a harem as romance then that won't happen. 4. Seriously, God enslaving him? Dude, god gives the MC whatever he asks for. 5. Not being able to travel multiverse on his own choice is just an element of the novel. Otherwise, do you think MC would have left the awesome family he had created in Harry Potter world? Would he have left Edward and Hermione?. I don't know why you didn't like the settings of my novel. Everyone got a different taste so can't blame you. Thanks for reading though. 👌🏻
MisterImmortal
MisterImmortalAuthorMisterImmortal

Thanks man, and no offense taken. Some guy gave a 1 start rating yesterday after just reading the tags, been angry since then 😅. Well, there's no going back now. God has already adobted him and will keep on sniffing around as he has a Son complex. 😂 I can only reduce the meddling of God a little in the next universe.

_EMI_:I still think that this novel is above average and I am going to continue reading it, but I am just giving my honest review here. Didn't mean to offend you. Cheer up. It would make it a lot more easier if god had just left him alone. That element of novel is annoying.
Shadewind
ShadewindLv6Shadewind

Can you tell me who will be his romance partner. ...? Also will she be old like mc...? And I can't seem to decide if I Wanna read it or not as old Mc is not up to my liking.

MisterImmortal:Thanks man, and no offense taken. Some guy gave a 1 start rating yesterday after just reading the tags, been angry since then 😅. Well, there's no going back now. God has already adobted him and will keep on sniffing around as he has a Son complex. 😂 I can only reduce the meddling of God a little in the next universe.
MisterImmortal
MisterImmortalAuthorMisterImmortal

Well, the start is not the best. Don't expect MC to strictly follow the canon. This is more of a slice of life. Romance starts from chapter 100. It isn't too much, just mild. Yes she will be old but won't look that old. Here, I've attached an image of her.

Shadewind:Can you tell me who will be his romance partner. ...? Also will she be old like mc...? And I can't seem to decide if I Wanna read it or not as old Mc is not up to my liking.
Shadewind
ShadewindLv6Shadewind

Who is she....?

MisterImmortal:Well, the start is not the best. Don't expect MC to strictly follow the canon. This is more of a slice of life. Romance starts from chapter 100. It isn't too much, just mild. Yes she will be old but won't look that old. Here, I've attached an image of her.
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AADucxter_42069
AADucxter_42069Lv5AADucxter_42069

ohh so once he left a certain universe he cant go back there anymore???

MisterImmortal:1. MC is employed by god. So obviously there will be rules and things out of MCs control. 2. This story is not about action. It's simple about helping whichever Universe he goes to. 3. He will eventually have a female partner. If you consider a harem as romance then that won't happen. 4. Seriously, God enslaving him? Dude, god gives the MC whatever he asks for. 5. Not being able to travel multiverse on his own choice is just an element of the novel. Otherwise, do you think MC would have left the awesome family he had created in Harry Potter world? Would he have left Edward and Hermione?. I don't know why you didn't like the settings of my novel. Everyone got a different taste so can't blame you. Thanks for reading though. 👌🏻
AADucxter_42069
AADucxter_42069Lv5AADucxter_42069

plslss answer author

MisterImmortal:1. MC is employed by god. So obviously there will be rules and things out of MCs control. 2. This story is not about action. It's simple about helping whichever Universe he goes to. 3. He will eventually have a female partner. If you consider a harem as romance then that won't happen. 4. Seriously, God enslaving him? Dude, god gives the MC whatever he asks for. 5. Not being able to travel multiverse on his own choice is just an element of the novel. Otherwise, do you think MC would have left the awesome family he had created in Harry Potter world? Would he have left Edward and Hermione?. I don't know why you didn't like the settings of my novel. Everyone got a different taste so can't blame you. Thanks for reading though. 👌🏻
MisterImmortal
MisterImmortalAuthorMisterImmortal

Not in the beginning. He will gain the ability in the future but still won't do it as there's no point. He'll be busy with whatever world he'll be in.

AADucxter_42069:ohh so once he left a certain universe he cant go back there anymore???
AADucxter_42069
AADucxter_42069Lv5AADucxter_42069

ohh okay tnx for the response

MisterImmortal:Not in the beginning. He will gain the ability in the future but still won't do it as there's no point. He'll be busy with whatever world he'll be in.
techlover64
techlover64Lv2techlover64

I mean he is really just given the goal to "get the world to 90% purity", not directed how. So technically he is more like a servant than a puppet.

SumGai
SumGaiLv11SumGai

First, you're definitely a hardcore atheist who seriously hates religion. there's no second

_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4_EMI_

It's true.

SumGai:First, you're definitely a hardcore atheist who seriously hates religion. there's no second
SumGai
SumGaiLv11SumGai

well, didn't really need confirmation. Reading your extremely biased review is more than enough to pick up the signs

_EMI_:It's true.
_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4_EMI_

Call it what you will, every moment of MC's life is indirectly being control by GOD in this novel, which should be unreasonable to except for a person who's supposed to be millions of times smarter than the smartest human being. And by the way, your deliberate provocation by using this sentence simply proves the biased way you live your life. So... don't need a confirmation there either.

SumGai:well, didn't really need confirmation. Reading your extremely biased review is more than enough to pick up the signs
EpithetEnjoyer
EpithetEnjoyerLv1EpithetEnjoyer

Ngl, not being able to have a cake identity would dissapoint me too.