It is an interesting storyline. However, a couple things to be wary about. The writing never improves. I don't mind the minor grammatical errors. But the sentence structure is just awful. It requires too much thought to figure out who is speaking. Then the author screws up the difference between " & ' so often times what should be a thought, is said out loud but followed up with "thinking to himself" But my biggest issues, the constant repeating chapters. Mistakes happen, but even after being informed, the author does not put a message to warn other readers that the chapter is a duplicate. Worst of all, the chapters don't often have the same name, which tells me this is a malicious act. I'm done with this book, which is a same because the plot is well done.
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