A really nice work you have put up here, Bro. The story progresses quite well and is well paced. The setting of a goal for the MC to pursue early on defines it nicely and allows readers to look forward to it. The theme and setting is unique and really to my liking. Makes you curious to know what will happen next. A spelling mistake here and there should be taken care of. Looking forward to it.
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