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Rank less = without a rank. wouldn't even be rank 1. should I change it to rank 0?
Bruh thats way funnier than what I was going for. it was supposed to be Chucky with a knife, like from the movie xd
The artifact concept is a nice touch to the worldbuilding. I especially like when technology gets a magical rework in stories 🫡
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I had considered that. but eventually I decided that this won't be a system novel. Of course I'll consider ways to make it easier to remember technical stuff like auxiliary chapters or something else.
Unironically, so true 😭
Post apocalyptic world with a VR theme is a unique take that I am reading for the first time. So far I have liked the progression and sense of mystery about the reason behind alien invasion and VR games creation. The writing is very good and the main character is fleshed out really well. The game mechanics are something to look forward to as we progress and understand more about the virtual world. Overall its a great read and I'd reccomend others to give it a try.
Mans legit talking to his body... sigh hunger can make many of us go crazy indeed 🤣
yep
Itna gyan mat pel 🤣🤣
Overall, the story as far as I read is a fun progression, with nice world building done. The interaction of the three main characters is nicely showcased and the conversations are always nice to read through. The buildup about the world history, hints about the 1st world, 2nd worlds create a good tone to start this story. Especially the raw emotions reflected during the starting help to draw in the reader. Great job and keep up with the work.