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When I first started reading this fanfic I was really enjoying it, but things kinda got messy with the Harry Potter ark, but I pulled through it, and then we have the MC back in the Witcher world, which was fine, but the we have him prepare for war and he starts bringing in characters from other worlds... the point I kinda got dissapointed was Fleur. I think that went in a direction that made me almost drop it. I then continued, but the the MC ends up in a relashiongip with Ciri and the other characters I really liked kinda got ignored. The around 700+ came and I just dropped it... I started skipping the chapters to see where it goes and if any of the other characters end up with the MC. Queelagg does I suppose, but the way it happens just made me mad. The author put a lot of effort into writing the Dark Souls characters, but he just destroyed them in my opinion. All in all, I kinda wish the Dark Souls ark was a completely separate fanfic and the author focused more on the Witcher world. I guess that is about all I had to say. This is really the longest review I wrote on WebNovel hahaha... 4 stars for writing quality - overall I think the writing was great, some mistakes here and there, but nothing major. 2 stars for story development - honestly... the story went downhill pretty quick in my humble opinion, and some of the decisions the author made seemed very forced and some didn't really make sense 3 stars for characters - i found myself enjoying the Dark Soups ark the most, mostly because of the characters, and the Witcher parts weren't really that fleshed out I think, especially Ciri (honestly, I kinda hated her in this fanfic) and the fact that the romance between them came kinda out of nowhere. The reason I gave it 3 stars instead of 2 is because of the Dark Souls ark

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