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Review Detail of Mr_Shang in Epic of Caterpillar

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Mr_Shang
Mr_ShangLv132yrMr_Shang

Ok so this novel this novel isn't good or bad, there are some people that will like but unfortunately I'm not one of them, one advice if you want to enjoy this you need to shut down your brain, because that are so much nonsense that if you care about plot holes you will go crazy.

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Epic of Caterpillar

PancakesWitch

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DaoistMQc4Nw
DaoistMQc4NwLv12DaoistMQc4Nw

So, if i may, i just started reading this and i found couple of things that i dont understand, the water spear in the very first chapter, th MC said he uses almost all of his mp just to create one, and the next day she just throw it all around like its not even cost his mp at all, and how do mp exactly work? How much is every spell actuallt cost? Because the novel just mention the mp when it started to ran out, so i don't understand how much is 43 mp actually is, like, how many spell can he cast with 43 mp, Well that aside, i just read a couple of ch, hoping that all of that will be answered in the next chapter, just a suggestion for me if you'll make another novel is that in the very first chapter, maybe you want to put more attention to how exactly the system works, like making an comparison, to how strong is 40 Strenght, maybe you can explain that 40 Strenght can pull 100 kg, or lift a tree Weight 150 kg, or say that 40 Strenght is 4x normal human Strenght normal human have in earth, so that the "numbers " In the system actually means something and we, AS a reader can picture how strong is the character in the novel, and we can relate more, if you just do a number and without an further explanation, its become really boring and pointless if the number goes up, because we can actually understand how strong is the number, maybe if you go 100 speed you can run in the same as a car ( 100 km/h) or some Sorry for my bad english, i just read another novel when the number in the system literally become useless, its just going through the roof and we don't understand how strong its actually is

PancakesWitch:there are no plotholes, i explain eevrything in my story as it goes on
PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchAuthorPancakesWitch

there are no plotholes, i explain eevrything in my story as it goes on

Mr_Shang
Mr_ShangLv13Mr_Shang

For me in my position of reader, I could see some nonsense that made me stop reading your story, it's like I said for people that will come and reading reviews, if you want to enjoy this story just turn off your brain. Good luck with you're novels they just aren't for me.

PancakesWitch:there are no plotholes, i explain eevrything in my story as it goes on
PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchAuthorPancakesWitch

"things that make no sense" are explained through the story. Do you need instant explanations of everything in the world of a story for you to find some joy reading it? isn't that asking for info dumps? I don't get you

Mr_Shang:For me in my position of reader, I could see some nonsense that made me stop reading your story, it's like I said for people that will come and reading reviews, if you want to enjoy this story just turn off your brain. Good luck with you're novels they just aren't for me.
Villain116
Villain116Lv3Villain116

Got a point

PancakesWitch:"things that make no sense" are explained through the story. Do you need instant explanations of everything in the world of a story for you to find some joy reading it? isn't that asking for info dumps? I don't get you