Review Detail of Lil_Mike1 in Epic of Caterpillar

Writing quality: 3/5 The writing quality has many small issues which causes issues overtime, with words being used when theres better alternatives and straight up spelling errors throughout the novel. Another huge issue is how a lot of the main side characters have almost the exact same dialogue, which is repeated multiple times through the same chapter, resulting in chapters such as 814 which is just all the of main characters children and wives saying near identical things reacting to He main character waking up, come on. Updating stability: 5/5 Frequent and without missing many if any releases, no problems here. Story developement: 3/5 The main overarching plot of the book is quite good, and one of the main reasons im still reading this novel, but theres some big issues with how the novel tends to repeat the plot, the main character hears that theres a problem in the near future, waits until the laat moment to do anything about it, either preventative or eliminiting the problem directly, has a very long fight sequence where the side characters fight essentially nameless enemies which can essentially summed up as "Side character A beats enemy B" which takes up 1-3 chapters each and averages a total of 20 chapters all together, then the big bad guy is killed (But sometimes not really), then the main character does it all over again after 20-30 chapters of powering up. Character design: 2.5/5 There are few characters in this story who have a unique personality, as most of the children and wives have near identical personalities, with other side characters showing up once every 50-100 chapters excluding the battles, all originality is gone because theres about 30 Wives and 25 children, how the hell are we supposed to be attached to these characters when after they're born they're essentially just a clone of the last 10 with minor variations on race, the only time they are ever slightly different is when fighting, when I can Vagurly tell whos who because of what mech they turned into (which honestly in my opinion was a bad design choice as all characters fighting styles are just mech that shoot and punch now) World background: 2.5/5 Pretty generic litrpg background, we got a generic wuxia style of connected planes and higher/lower world, and a power system that changes into other popular systems, for example it went from one similar to reincarnated as a spider, to the gods having a reverend insanity power system, to a litrpg system where you gain power eating things, to more recently a system very similar to "infinite mana in he apocalypse" Overall, Pretty meh world World background and character design are averaged to 3 and 2 respectively due to half stars not existing on the app.